What do you mean?
Your melody is a kind of stereotype. It proves that you have no idea about Russian or Soviet music. It's Jewish tune mostly I suppose. And I don't think that your work belongs to jazz (wrong instruments) and the sound is too artificial. You'd better listen real 'Soviet Russia' music first and compose music than!
I mean it was fun to make, and that's what I thought of, party pooper. :p
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